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Friday 16 August 2013

Persuasive Writing


Children should work from the age of 8.

I think that children should not work at the
age of 8 because they are too little for the
job, they might not have rests.

I disagree to this discussion because, if
they work they can’t reach anything and
also they can not lift anything.

I also disagree because they won’t have time to play
with their family and cousins.

Children are not fit to work from that age because they might get a head
injury and if break a bone in their leg
or arm when working.

To summarise, children are not ready physically to work in the jobs that adults work in. They still need time to grow up and enjoy their childhood.

3 comments:

Edwina said...

Hi Voni

What an awesome persuasive work you have done. I loved how you wrote it down and it sounded beautiful. Keep up the great work!

Edwina said...

Hi Voni

What an awesome persuasive work you have done. I loved how you wrote it down and it sounded beautiful. Keep up the great work!

Atelaite tangimausia taufa said...

Hi Voni

Great work you have there:) KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK VONI!!!!

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